Very good. Very very good.
But since it's kind of annoying to remake the typical motion-picture-anime-style, you should consider going for something else. I'm thinking harder shading and stronger (out-)lines.
Once you're done, make sure to give me the file in .eps-format. OKAY?
Edit: AND HO-LY-!@#$%. WHAT ABOUT KONATA'S AWESOME THINGY ON HER HEAD?
Man what are you doing
Edit Numero Deux: Or does she have a pony-tail there? Does that mean her strain-thingy doesn't show?