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Zelda in Tunic. >_>
« on: December 01, 2006, 10:49:14 pm »
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As you may or may not know, my fangame features Zelda, rather than Link. Now, I've been thinking for a while "since she's going to be swimming and battle monsters and such, maybe it'd make more sense for her to wear a tunic". So I tried it, but something bothers me about the tunic version, so C+C would be nice. Also, included the dress version. >_>

Tunic Version:


Tunic Version 2:


Dress Version:

« Last Edit: December 01, 2006, 11:52:03 pm by ZoraFan89 »
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« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2006, 10:57:38 pm »
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I just dislike the feets, you need to separate them more >.<
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« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2006, 11:01:46 pm »
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I always objected to the idea of using Zelda as a main character in a fan game until I saw this.  The tunic improves the sprite and the style a lot.  I kind of doubt that even a princess would go save the day in her dress.

I agree with Kren, the feet don't look right.
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« Reply #3 on: December 01, 2006, 11:16:24 pm »
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Dress looks way better, maybe you can use it as an extra or for a minigame ey?
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« Reply #4 on: December 01, 2006, 11:29:04 pm »
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K, fixed the feet among other things.

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« Reply #5 on: December 01, 2006, 11:52:01 pm »
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Keep the gloves shes wearing on the first sprite.
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« Reply #6 on: December 02, 2006, 12:21:51 am »
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The arms seem sectioned off, if the bottom half is the hands then make the arm one pixel longer and the hand one pixel shorter. If it is a different section of the arm connect the sections. Also the arms kinda seem to appear to come from nowhere, thought maybe that is just me. And her pants seem a little too puffy for an adventerous tunic, give her some flexibility.
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« Reply #7 on: December 02, 2006, 10:52:49 am »
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The poofiness probably comes from those side thingies (the blue things), which is kinda what I was going for.

Anyways, update:


Changed hairstyle too...:D?
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« Reply #8 on: December 02, 2006, 02:33:08 pm »
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Wow those pants are alot better. ;D Um, I see what you are trying to go for with the hair, but it kinda messes up the eye on the left. Like she has that eye half closed. I like the style, but I would make it more simetrical(not completely, but more). Also, the arms still look kind of sectioned but it is not noticable without looking very closely, noone will care during gameplay, and it may mess them up to fix it. But overall I'd say 9/10 8)
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Re: Zelda in Tunic. >_>
« Reply #9 on: December 02, 2006, 08:46:25 pm »
 :o wow... just .. wow ... amazing work zorafan !!! btw are you busy i was wondering if from time to time you could help my game graphically?
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« Reply #10 on: December 02, 2006, 08:51:01 pm »
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fix the top of the hair and ill pass it :)
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« Reply #11 on: December 03, 2006, 01:12:22 am »
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whats wrong with the top of her dress?
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« Reply #12 on: December 03, 2006, 01:13:09 am »
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It's really good job. ;)
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« Reply #13 on: December 03, 2006, 05:15:50 am »
http://img487.imageshack.us/img487/3821/zeldatunic2eg9.gif
^ looks better than the latest version.
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« Reply #14 on: December 03, 2006, 11:46:43 am »
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Meh, I like the dress version too :(.

Can't you like... make the first 15 minutes of gameplay with the dress, and the rest with the tunic or something :P?



...I don't know why, but it looks like something the Gerudos would wear ????
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« Reply #15 on: December 03, 2006, 04:41:31 pm »
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I still say keep the red gloves>_>
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« Reply #16 on: December 03, 2006, 08:51:41 pm »
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I like how it looks, just needs what .TakaM said. But I wonder how she'd look with a cape and that tunic? ;D
Does she get different tunics in the game too? ;)
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« Reply #17 on: December 05, 2006, 07:20:27 am »
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I like how you took my suggestion and changed the "banger" or whatever it is you're supposed ot call it. But, my eyes still shrivel up and burn whenever I try to inspect this sprite closely. I think it has to do with what .TakaM was saying. Give her some outlines, it might just be the size of the sprite, but it's really hard to focus on it @_@.

Sorry for the critizism. You know I know the sprite rocks.
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« Reply #18 on: December 05, 2006, 08:33:19 pm »
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cb, for the first few minutes she'll be in the dress, but as soon as the adventure starts (well...a bit after it starts), she switches to the tunic. I actually fixed what TakaM said...but I'm not at home right now, so I cant show you. Also, I might add a cape, thats actually a good idea. But...red gloves? >_>
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« Reply #19 on: December 05, 2006, 09:09:14 pm »
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Sweet! You are gonna add the cape! ;D I hope it looks good. :)
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